Congratulations to Our Contest Winners!

Jan 17, 20144 min read

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Published: Jan 17, 2014

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Surrogate Contest Conclusion

Firstly, allow me to Thank you all for Entering the Contest, it was great reading all of your poems and seeing the diverse perspectives from each of you! Not only did you give me some great works to read, but you also showed awesome insentive to all the Members of our little Group, and for that alone you are all Winners! All of your Poems will be placed in the Feature Folder

Winners as Follows:
First Place - - SurrogateYou are nothing but a surrogate,
That dares to try and bend and break my soul,
Twist it and corrugate.
I will not bow and I will not break,
At the hands of a fake.
Nothing but a surrogate,
this and nothing more.
We no longer correlate.
I don't want to talk anymore.
I will not allow you to prevaricate.
Every breath you take I've come to hate,
Your lies I know without a need to interrogate.
You can pick up the pieces but it's far to late.
You see,
Unforgiveness was one of my real mother traits. - 100 Points! WTG!
Second Place - - SubstitutionThey told her that is was final,
That there was no way out,
Her parents were in denial,
They cried tears of doubt.
They wanted to save their child.
From the day she was born,
Her body given life,
Her parents swore,
That she would be alright.
For her their hearts they poured.
When her heart started to fail,
The beating machine,
Her parents wailed,
"No! This just can't be!"
With fear they quailed.
Her parents then found,
Another opinion,
They were astounded,
Full of confusion,
Though they found what they wanted.
The donor didn't know,
What had happened,
His death was slow,
Let's not imagine.
He saved a life though.
From this experiment,
The girl's life was saved,
Her heart a proxy, surrogate,
Though it's a little depraved.
Nothing is ever permanent. - 50 Points! WTG!
Third Place - - :thumb425820814: - 50 Points! WTG!
Fourth Place - - Surrogate PoemWhen I was a surrogate,
I was really arrogant.
It cause me so much embarrassment,
that it changed my temperament.
Causing me to pay more rent.
I did it out of hate,
which lead to me not getting a date.
So I ate,
because I couldn't find a mate.
That caused me to be irate.
This lead to other issues,
that caused me to use up a big box tissues.
Then I realized I should learn Ninjitsu.
Which caused me to be blue
So that's why cow's go moooo. - 25 Points! WTG!

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